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Come to my Window

By Mirla
This is my morning wake up call

Tags: Humming bird Wildlife and nature

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21 Aug 2010 10:06PM
Beautiful capture well done.


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very nice shot! my only real criticism maybe the green blurs obstructing part of the focus area. hope this was useful Smile
21 Aug 2010 10:17PM
WOW you are really lucky great capture
moiral 6 12 Scotland
21 Aug 2010 10:40PM
Lovely shot, wish stuff like this would come to my window. Moira
paulbroad 9 116 1064 United Kingdom
22 Aug 2010 9:48AM
What a fantastic opportunity. You have done well to get it at all - just needs to be a little sharper for perfection.

Davesumner 9 28 300 Australia
22 Aug 2010 1:44PM
Hi Mirla,

You're lucky to be able to photograph these lovely birds and if this is a daily occurence then whilst this is a great shot I think you can do better with a little more thought.

The first thing I did was to type hummingbird into Google Images and I noticed that the best images there were with the wings blurred and the body sharp. I feel that you need to slow down the shutter speed a little until the wings are slightly blurred. Also you need to make sure that you have a clear shot of the bird so it isn't hidden behind leaves.

You've managed to blur the background superbly here and had the shot had those two elements I mentioned above, it would be brilliant. You must get the birds eyes sharp though, that is very important.

Keep trying and posting here, I'm sure we are all eagerly awaiting the great shots that you have the potential to make.

Hope this helps

Mirla 6
22 Aug 2010 9:55PM
Thank you all you guys!! I love all your comments and I will try to put attention to all your sugestions!! Have a great day!

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