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saeidNL 6 3 Netherlands
7 Jan 2011 4:01PM
Great mono shot,love it,
saeid

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andylea 7 37 1 United Kingdom
7 Jan 2011 4:07PM
great comp wonderful detail and tones a cracking mono nice one Wink
andy
achieverswales 5 8 101 Wales
7 Jan 2011 4:23PM
Love the model but background is to cluttered and shafts of light are distracting!

Regards

Trev.
lonely_oryx 8 61 54 England
7 Jan 2011 6:52PM

Quote:Love the model but background is to cluttered and shafts of light are distracting!

Regards

Trev.



Tend to agree
Great Shot, just love it.
Alan
PeterDSmith 7 13 46 United Kingdom
9 Jan 2011 5:31PM
I must admit that, like lonely_oryx, I agree with achieverswales. As it is, because the background is so distracting, your model does not stand out in the frame. I think your model would have stood out better if the photograph were in colour.

Furthermore, I think you have done well to position your model according to the Rule of Thirds, near enough. Well, not exactly in the centre of the frame, anyway. However, on the right-hand third, she is looking out of the frame. If she were to be positioned on the left-hand third, she would be looking into the frame, a better composition?
gary_d Plus
8 576 13 Wales
16 Jan 2011 1:08PM
she is looking out of the frame. If she were to be positioned on the left-hand third, she would be looking into the frame, a better composition?


This is the first thing that caught my eye but I do like the pose. - gary
Richsr Plus
9 90 220 England
27 Apr 2011 12:49PM
You have some good feedback to work with on this one, keep up the good work.
Regrds Richard
Suehh 9 39 6 England
28 Apr 2011 10:20PM
Very nice mono - I like the subject's positioning - I guess it depends how the view reads the image - to me she is looking back a little - the past - and there is a whole long future in front of her - but that is just my thought.

Sues

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