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daisy and friend

By BuzzyBee
hi this is my little sister daisy and her friend that she met at the wedding. there was a park at the wedding so i took a picture of them on the swings ( they were going very high )
thanks for looking
bee

Tags: Scotland Fashion Black and white Wedding and social Portraits and people

Voters: User_Removed, User_Removed, bliba and 5 more


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User_Removed 13 2.1k 7 England
8 Dec 2008 8:09PM
Bee I like this. I think it's a little over exposed, too bright. But we can change that for you. It's a really nice composition I like that the girl to the right is a bit out of the picture, it gives the sense of height and speed. It's a really good shot we just need to play with the exposure aa bit, maybe one for your portfolio?? LDx

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User_Removed 13 7 8 Netherlands
8 Dec 2008 8:21PM
Hi Buzzybee, I like this too and agree with your father on the exposure. The composition is wonderful, as is the slight motion blur, as they call it.
bliba Plus
13 2 Austria
8 Dec 2008 9:47PM
good composition
alansdottir 11 60 7 United Kingdom
8 Dec 2008 10:47PM
I have to agree with your Dad on the exposure, Bee - but it's fixable. Daisy looks as though she is enjoying herself, too.

Carol
9 Dec 2008 3:05AM
This is such a wonderful and spontaneous shot. So well seen and timed. Agree that the subjects might need slight adjusting in exposure to really notch up this image. It will be great if you can maybe adjust that in PS, and upload again. Never mind the motion artifacts - that is all part of this image, and it works. Just the exposure, which can be done with the lassoo tool and an adjustment in Exposure/Gamma, or in Curves. They need to be darker, however, important to maintain the highlights.

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