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By youmightlikethis
not the normal happy snap a bit darker worth posting?

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iancrowson Plus
8 211 146 United Kingdom
25 Mar 2014 8:19PM
No1 is for me the better of the two.
An interesting and slightly disturbing image.
No 2 has potential but I feel it would be better in black and white.
I feel that the most important plus point about your photographs is that they are instantly recognisable due to your style.


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thanks for crit
Mollycat Plus
4 11 2 United Kingdom
25 Mar 2014 8:45PM
Nice to have your work recongnized.
TanyaH Plus
15 1.3k 394 United Kingdom
26 Mar 2014 10:26AM
I think V1 of this bunch - I don't know why, but as Ian says above, it's actually quite disturbing. Very, very good, but still disturbing. I know it's probably from the Fringe festival (?) and so is an enacted piece, but even so. It's one of those images that just make you wonder why on earth are the two girls doing the braiding are so serious, and what's with the blindfold on the girl sitting down? Intriguing, to say the least! Smile
paulbroad 10 123 1240 United Kingdom
26 Mar 2014 4:41PM
V2 and 3 leave me cold. What is going on? I fail to see the meaning and the Virgin stage, or wgatever, in the background haecly fits the theme.

V1 is quite good. It still has your characterisyic patchiness, but nothing like as obvious as usual and the image holds together well compositionally. The content, however, is confusing.


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