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Day dreams

By Bluesky65  
I met Ksenia during a post model shoot and she kindly obliged to pose.

Tags: Portrait Model Black and white Portraits and people

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NH_Snap 7 24 Scotland
18 Nov 2012 12:57AM
Love the angle - works for me. Wink

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18 Nov 2012 1:03AM
Glad you like it, wasn't sure wether to upload a 'square on' colour shot or this one...
banehawi Plus
13 1.8k 3851 Canada
18 Nov 2012 3:07AM
I like this, its quite different. The angle works for me.

When I download it, I find Im tempted to make the window and the frame parallel, which Ive done in mod1. I would like to see more detail in her face, with highlights toned down a little. I sharpened her face a little too, and since the cap is so sharp and high contrast, I softened it very slightly to mae it less prominent tonally.

Mod2 is a 10 X 8 crop which removes the top, - has the same adjustments. I like both, but if you need to crop for printing, crop the top. Mod3 is a duotone treatment I thought might work.

Hope this helps,


parob 7 3 74 France
18 Nov 2012 12:11PM
Right on Willie! While we're at it, why not erase the offending white spot in the bottom right hand of the image! Just a small detail. Paul Wink
banehawi Plus
13 1.8k 3851 Canada
18 Nov 2012 1:26PM
I noticed that Paul, but didnt find it intrusive, - but its easily removed.

ErictheViking 5 124 102 Scotland
18 Nov 2012 4:12PM
I like this as a black and white and seeing the other mods made I think it definately works. For me a square crop just brings the subject into the forefront and removes any distractions away from the face of a very nice young lady.

Eric Smile
18 Nov 2012 5:45PM
Thanks for the comments guy's, all taken on board Smile I like the square crop Eric, I think that the absence of the elbow also reduces distraction.

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