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Denver

By Abdelrazek
downtown Denver afternoon and he plays great Jaz...

Tags: Photo journalism General Black and white Portraits and people

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JackAllTog Plus
8 4.6k 58 United Kingdom
1 Jun 2011 1:24PM
Excellent photo and focussing, can even see the movement on the fingers i think.

Critique - well maybe he is just to centre frame and the whole trumpet could instead be included with him looking out the frame.
Also top left there is a dark diagonal shade of white making the picture look unbalenced.
Exposure seems fine for the face but maybe dome dodge/burn (can't remember which one - make it a tad darker) on the fingers would add some more impact.
I'll try a quick mod with googles Picassa...

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paulbroad 9 123 1141 United Kingdom
1 Jun 2011 6:35PM
Potentially excellent but I would like eye contact and, in exposing for his flesh tones, everything else has become a bit to light. Would try burning in some areas a bit to add some density.

Paul

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