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Deserted Beach

By fentiger    
Taken on the beach at Old Hunstanton in Norfolk trying to convey the feeling of isolation with no one else around. Again I wonder whether I have overdone the keyline borders.

Tags: Norfolk Landscape and travel Old hunstanton

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John_Frid 11 514 56 United Kingdom
10 Nov 2011 9:10AM
Modification uploaded in black and white

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CarolG Plus
10 199 20 Greece
10 Nov 2011 9:19AM
How wonderful, Albert, there's nothing better than a deserted beach, just like ours are now Smile. Love the presentation, too. Carol
10 Nov 2011 9:23AM
looks perfect
Think I would have put some grass over that black spot .. tends to distract me from the beauty of that lonely beach,
CaroleS Plus
7 430 3 United Kingdom
10 Nov 2011 9:42AM
A lovely isolated beach scene, like Barbara I think I might have cloned out the black spot and I might have used just one line for the framing - but hindsight is a wonderful thing!! I love the composition and the sky is perfect. Carole
gingerdelight 11 298 11 United Kingdom
10 Nov 2011 9:59AM
I agree about the black spot, it is distracting and I would have cloned some grass onto it. That apart, however, it is a stunning image, and looks perfect to me.
Carol
davey_griffo 8 213 165 England
10 Nov 2011 10:00AM
Nicely composed, & I rather like your border, which I don't often say.

For me, it just needed something, a person or a dog maybe. You have so many strong lead-in lines (the triangle of sea, the edge of the beach, & from the other side, the triangle of grass), but there's nothing for the eye to settle on when it gets there.
mikbee 10 3 8 Scotland
10 Nov 2011 1:21PM
Borders look fine to me Albert.
Sets the image off nicely I feel.
Mick.
Daisymaye Plus
8 23 11 Canada
10 Nov 2011 7:11PM
It has a nice wispy cloud sky. The black spot could be fixed easily enough. A lovely image.............Sandy
Jestertheclown 8 7.5k 251 England
10 Nov 2011 9:09PM
Hi Albert,

The sky looks very slightly noisy (unless it's artefacts) and there's a slight halo efect around the grass in the centre where it's at its most distant.
The black spot doesn't seem to be very popular and I'd certainly lose that border.
Overall though, I rather like it.

Bren.
fentiger 16 916 23 England
11 Nov 2011 7:00AM
Many thanks for all your comments which have been most useful. Thanks also for the mod, I did look at a mono version but felt that colour worked best.

Albert
pascalg Plus
10 37 France
13 Nov 2011 7:01AM
quite like the difference between grass / clouds
very nice
paulbroad 10 123 1170 United Kingdom
13 Nov 2011 4:55PM
I like this, and am prepared to break all my rules. I normally want a figure, but not here and I actually like the border, and that is unusual - keeps everything bounded I think. I would shift the black blob though.

Paul

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