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Destiny

By rocking_roxxy
Taken in a local cemetary.


Whoops, I forgot to put a frame on it!

Tags: Death Graveyard Architecture Religion Ireland Cemetary Crosses

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cirrusminor 8 380 3 England
28 Jan 2009 11:35PM
Nice... Like the title Wink
Tim

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28 Jan 2009 11:35PM
thanks tim Grin
glazzaro 11 70 23 United States
29 Jan 2009 12:07AM
There a a couple of things that could be done to make this photo better. Just some observations, there are a lot of deep shadows and detail is lost. Understanding it is a cemetery and a degree of darkness works, I believe that some of your comp is lost because you lose some definition in the stone work. Also the sky is a bit to dark and almost looks as the shadows are masking the blue sky that is trying to break through.

Camera Suggestions:

1. Increase the iso to bring in more light
2. Reduce the aperture, could get by shooting this between 4 - 6
3. To avoid overexposure consider setting the AE against the brightest part of the clouds then lock.

Editing Suggestions:

1. Reduce shadows so that more detail is apparent, adjust to the mood your trying to set, but also leave something for the viewer to see.
2. Increasing saturation could help to highlight some of the details
3. Increasing brightness would also benefit the overall shot.

Greg
29 Jan 2009 12:11AM
Thanks greg! But I only used a compact camera to take the picture so I couldnt change the iso etc, but I have finally got an slr and i cant wait to get using it Grin

Thanks for the advice Grin

( im not great at editing! I need to get a good software first! )
Carabosse Plus
13 40.0k 269 England
29 Jan 2009 1:13AM
For me the sky is a bit too yellow and I agree with Greg that the stone work is a bit to dark. This is easily remedied by selectively removing some of the yellow from the sky and, again selectively, using (for example) th shadows/highlights tool to lighten up the shadows: if doing this it is best to increase the mid tone contrast as well.

I've uploaded a mod to demonstrate this.
miptog 10 3.5k 61 United Kingdom
29 Jan 2009 10:57AM
A lesson here is to decide what part of an image to take exposure from. The camera has looked at the whole scene and exposed for the brightest sky. If you had pointed the camera at one of the grave stones the shadows would have been better exposed.
29 Jan 2009 12:57PM
Thanks for the tips guys Smile
Headless 7 18 4 United Kingdom
1 Apr 2009 1:31AM
Its a great subjct and you've done well with a compact. I'm in the similar situation with a compact and the tech, software is not my thing. Some great advice from Greg here to that I could benifit from too!
Excellent title!
andy
thanks heaedless! I didnt even have to think about the title, it just was instant lol

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