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Dewi Sri Memberkati

By Alfonzoo
Foto yang menggambarkan tokoh cerita rakyat tanah Jawa, Indonesia, yaitu Dewi Sri tengah memberkati hamparan sawah petani agar mendapat panen yang bagus.

Tags: Mystical Digitally manipulated Digital art Digital manipulated Folklore Dongeng Cerita rakyat

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Davesumner 10 28 300 Australia
30 Mar 2010 5:47AM
This is a UK website so you're going to have to change your description to English otherwise nobody will know what your intentions are with the image and what you did to create it.

DaVeS

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Davesumner 10 28 300 Australia
30 Mar 2010 6:05AM
I hope that Alfonzoo doesn't mind but I have had the comments translated and they are:

The photo describes a folk story from Java, Indonesia. Itís about Sri, a Goddess, blessing a farmerís field so it can produce a good harvest.

DaVeS
paulbroad 9 123 1149 United Kingdom
30 Mar 2010 8:14AM
Very poficient and imprssive. You must use English though - without the translation the meaning is lost. on't need the logo o th right.

Paul
nishad1994 7 264 Oman
30 Mar 2010 10:58AM
A very impressive photograph. The colours are very vibrant and strong !! Very nice work ... Smile
I agree about the logo on the top right corner.

Nishad
clicknimagine 7 221 88
30 Mar 2010 11:51AM
i came to know from the Daves comment, the meaning of the photograph, i like the arrangement of the butterflies and it does look like fibonacci spiral, though two butterflies are not completely in the frame,

the colors look a bit over saturated, and everything from the mountain to the sky and clouds look completely unnatural, as well as i can not understand whether the arrangement of the butterflies in this way helps your composition or not,

to me it is a creative attempt, but the execution is not that standard,

wish you best of luck for your future works...
DRicherby 8 269 725 United Kingdom
30 Mar 2010 3:20PM
Overall, I think this works very well. Obviously, it's not supposed to look natural but the bottom third is still maybe a bit too saturated. The spiral of butterflies does a good job of linking the image components together. It would be nice if the different butterflies had their wings open by different amounts, as if it was flying, but that would be very difficult to do.
Paree 12 616 3
30 Mar 2010 10:53PM
hello Alfonzoo
I hope you can understand this
I have made a mod for you

i have desaturated it and remove some of the butterflies,

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