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Donna 1st Session

By ginz04    
Can I introduce you to Donna , who answered an advert for models wanted - myself and another ezine photographer and formed a team with the goal being to produce a portfolio of photographs.

This session is our first session as a team , first proper session in my studio, first proper session with my new camera. Donna has only had one session prior to this.

The session started of badly with a studio light smouldering and smoking.

We started off slowly and speeded up after half an hour - this picture is the very first one taken over the next few weeks hopefully you will see more from this and subsequent sessions.

tHE LIGHTING USED WAS 1 soft box set at f8 to our right and 1 hairlight set at 2.8. Backdrop was a black dust sheet.

Tags: Portraits and people

Voters: gwynann, luigitoi, bytorphoto and 22 more


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grazza 18 12 United Kingdom
8 Jan 2005 12:12PM
Nice capture. The eyes are spot on! Click.
gwynann 17 72 United Kingdom
8 Jan 2005 12:13PM
Happy new year, cracking shot, the lighting is spot on around Donna,s face, but i think its a little hard on her hands, you have captured her lovely eyes really well, click
Gwyn
marc321 17 48
8 Jan 2005 12:40PM
great shot, well framed, stunning model. Look forward to seeing more..
click
paulsteds 17 123 England
8 Jan 2005 12:41PM
Great shot..
Paul
FrankThomas 18 2.8k United Kingdom
8 Jan 2005 12:46PM
I think you might have overdone the light on her hands and the sweater 'cos it looks a bit hot to me. The face looks pretty much perfect. I think you might also have a bit too much spill from the hairlight as I can see the backdrop (unless that is what you intended in which case, ignore this !!)

I'm looking forward to seeing how you get on with her
magda_indigo 18 418 England
8 Jan 2005 1:16PM
Like it, she's got'attitude' and is definitely not camera shy! click (*:*)
User_Removed 17 386 2 United Kingdom
8 Jan 2005 1:17PM
A really beautiful picture.
Excellent.
Click!

Lucien.

PS Thank you for your comment to my picture "Innocence", but Ian, you forgot to click it. :0(
paul_indigo 18 259 United Kingdom
8 Jan 2005 2:01PM
Nice opener.
karenpics 16 2
8 Jan 2005 2:47PM
Great shot well done. click Karen
phiggy 19 7 United Kingdom
8 Jan 2005 2:52PM
Lovely shot.

Phil
glazzaro 16 70 23 United States
8 Jan 2005 3:44PM
Another fine shot! Just a suggestion, I would see if you could tone down the light on the hands a bit and maybe add some shadowing. The eyes are a great capture, I find them very alluring! Good Job! Spot On! Click!!!
cbg 17 1
8 Jan 2005 5:50PM
great portrait. eyes have it. nice pose and hope to see more. chris
janine_w 17 30
8 Jan 2005 9:26PM
A beautiful portrait, well composed.
Thanks for letting me mess with it a little.
jerishoots 17 3 Saudi Arabia
8 Jan 2005 11:44PM
i like the lips...it speaks more of her persona. good one for the first time...hi donna! Smile
dontforgetme 17 1.7k 7 United Kingdom
9 Jan 2005 3:01AM
Hope we see more of Donna, and hope you like my alternative image.

Jules
ginz04 17 281 20 United Kingdom
9 Jan 2005 3:39AM
Thank you all for your constructive comments, I agree i think in thunmnail the picture looks a bit yellowy so I think the black and white version is better. Thanks for all your suggestions - i have loads more from this session so keep watching. ian
User_Removed 17 386 2 United Kingdom
9 Jan 2005 4:18AM
Thanks for the click Ian. :0)
Lucien.
vparmar 17 7 United Kingdom
9 Jan 2005 6:58AM
great shot, well captured would like to see B & W version stunning model. click. Vinny
ginz04 17 281 20 United Kingdom
9 Jan 2005 9:56AM
thanx luc and vinny. regards ian
panda 17 5 1 England
9 Jan 2005 12:00PM
Nice shot, look forward to more in the series.

Phil
ginz04 17 281 20 United Kingdom
9 Jan 2005 12:02PM
Thank you phil
User_Removed 18 39 6 Scotland
9 Jan 2005 12:40PM
Hi Ian Glad to hear all the hard work is begining to pay off.Hope things works out well as she looks very natuarl with a nice fresh face. Photo a touch a yellow but you know that already otherwise first class session. Are you going for something grand hiring a town hall !!.

Sorry I have come here so late but have been doing DIY all weekend.

Take care

Victor

PS How you enjoying the new D100!
ginz04 17 281 20 United Kingdom
10 Jan 2005 9:37AM
Hi Vic how are you matey - hope you are keeping yourself and aileen well.

We are hiring the local community Hall for our next session and we have in mind to hire a professional studio in the next month or so - probably infotec in marple stockport they have a web page.

The D100 Im still getting use to - i dont find the auto focusing too reliable so am doing manual and I think im going to have to manually set wb rather than leave it on auto as well. Any tips with it will be appreciated as Im still new to digital photography.

Regards.

ian
Mavis 19 143 2 England
15 Jan 2005 5:33AM
I love the pose and a beautiful model . Just a bit pinker in the face and hands and it would be perfect . Perhaps a little reflector light ? x

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