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kaybee 15 6.8k 26 Scotland
14 Jan 2007 11:15AM
Another lovely shot but there are one or two details that need attention.

The head is having to turn a bit too much and causes quite a deep crease in the neck which isn't very flattering to your model. Also the dress strap is twisted and with the light hitting it it draws attention.

With your model being in the shade the lighting is slightly flat and a touch of extra light from a reflector or flash would help.

But these are all minor points. I only mention them because your work is VERY good and it is the details which will make it outstanding.

Roy

PS - I have added a modification

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skoffs 13 3 United States
14 Jan 2007 12:18PM
I like the composition. The placement of the model and the colors work well together.
jjwithamlao 13 5 1 England
14 Jan 2007 1:07PM
Like this composition
xenija 16 4 Montenegro
14 Jan 2007 1:52PM
Thank you for your comments. I wanted to add the wings but havenít got a time.
silburkp 15 3 England
15 Jan 2007 9:08PM
Nice shot, great colour & light.
15 Jan 2007 9:44PM
Beautiful shot of a beautiful girl!
GregorP 14 4 Slovenia
18 Jan 2007 1:27AM
Lovely shot and beautiful model.I like it.


GregorP
Term 14 86 9 England
24 Feb 2007 9:15PM

Quote:The head is having to turn a bit too much and causes quite a deep crease in the neck which isn't very flattering to your model. Also the dress strap is twisted and with the light hitting it it draws attention.

With your model being in the shade the lighting is slightly flat and a touch of extra light from a reflector or flash would help.

But these are all minor points. I only mention them because your work is VERY good and it is the details which will make it outstanding.



some interesting points, all valid and I think the modified picture is a stronger image, but as Kaybee says, its still a strong image, nicely composed, good colour and a naturally beautiful model.

Ben
TyChee 14 275 1 United States
1 Mar 2007 1:52AM
Beautiful image and model!

Ty

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