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21 Nov 2009 10:20AM
Great shot

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richard20d 9 115 10
21 Nov 2009 10:26AM
The next generation of Fashion Model. This is another nice shot and I know its a street scene, but the guy in the rugby shirt is so dominent in the image it distracts my eye. Perhaps a little more blur might remove him from standing out so much. These are some of my wifes favorite images on here. It made her get out all the black and white shots of the kids when they were younger.
kinfatric 13 550 9 Scotland
21 Nov 2009 10:31AM
a top street photograph but agree perhaps a little more blur as said above
andrejD 9 1 Germany
21 Nov 2009 10:34AM
Thank you Richard! I'm glad to hear that! The guy in the shirt is already blurred a little (I'm always worried about exaggerating this). I probably should have converted this to bw.
21 Nov 2009 11:36AM
Good picture and fun. If you crop out the guy on the extreme left then the guy with the jersey doesn't bother me. Dont fuss too much though - the gal says it all! A
jenquest 15 561 1 Tokelau
21 Nov 2009 11:46AM
She's a natural in front of the lens.
tazisdylan 8 1 10 United Kingdom
21 Nov 2009 5:11PM
A model in the making! Great pose (with the shoes), and attitude!

I think the feedback from all above is fair. And my suggestions are:

Blur the man with THAT shirt
Convert to mono
Colour pop your model

And maybe a slight crop on the right to get rid of the lady (my eye draws to her off the model's left arm. Not sure how the crop will influence the overall composition and you may find that the mono conversion and colour pop will make her less of an issue.

Anyway, these are my thoughts - not that I am an expert!
andrejD 9 1 Germany
21 Nov 2009 11:18PM
Oh, thanks Pete!

Thanks to everyone for your comments! All comments are justified. I hope that the photograph that I'll upload tomorrow (taken almost at the same time, as this one) will convince you a bit more.
riprap007 13 1.6k 37 England
21 Nov 2009 11:37PM
those butterflies oncemore; this belongs in a white box gallery
andrejD 9 1 Germany
21 Nov 2009 11:45PM
Thank you Nicholas! Unfortunately I don't really know what a white box galery is... This butterfly dress photographs are taken on the same day. Seems to be my most succesfull photogrraphic day so far Wink
riprap007 13 1.6k 37 England
21 Nov 2009 11:59PM
Any space with big white walls and preferably with a constant lighting, and to do it justice, I'd print large!
fasfoto 10 Czech Republic
22 Nov 2009 9:35PM
cats_123 Plus
14 4.8k 28 Northern Ireland
23 Nov 2009 4:56PM
brilliant street ph.

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