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Emma & Joe

By G6DDS  
Had an engagement shoot last week. Thought i would try something a little different with this one. Does it work?

Tags: Portraits and people

Voters: pamelajean, peterjones,


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18 Jun 2011 11:32AM
Like the lighting on this, but not sure about the crop. Seen your forum post, I know wot you mean even negative feedback is appreciated at least I would know.

Neil

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MikeRC Plus
10 3.6k United Kingdom
18 Jun 2011 11:41AM

Quote:Does it work?
...not for me it doesn't...sorry Smile

.....Mike
G6DDS Plus
6 231 Scotland
18 Jun 2011 11:48AM
Thanks for the comments Neil and Mike. Didn't start my thread in the aid of getting votes so it's appreciated to hear some honest feedback.

Iain
pamelajean Plus
10 949 1781 United Kingdom
18 Jun 2011 12:07PM
Hello, Iain. This doesn't work for me. It is too bright and I feel I would like to see the faces. I can understand that you probably wanted to depict the holding of hands, but the hands themselves are very hard to see. The engagement ring and the hands would make a lovely shot for such an occasion, but much closer. Sorry to be so negative.
Pamela.
cameracat 12 8.6k 61 Norfolk Island
18 Jun 2011 12:17PM
Not doing it for me either....Sad

Don't let that put you off trying something new though, Because its a brave move to try something a little different, But its the only way as an individual that you can break new ground, Or produce your own unique take/style ...!!!

Wink
JamesGarfield 6 915 4 United Kingdom
18 Jun 2011 12:27PM
Nope doesn't work for me either, I think I understand what you were trying to achieve, maybe slightly inceasing the contrast on the subjects and leaving the summer light around them may be better? Just a thought?
G6DDS Plus
6 231 Scotland
18 Jun 2011 2:05PM
I'm all for being different but if it's only myself that likes it then what is the point?
Don't say sorry Pamela, i'd rather have honest opinions than none at all.

Iain
Pete Plus
14 18.8k 96 England
18 Jun 2011 3:54PM
I love this type of technique into the sun with loads of rim light and overexposure...we have a few young photographers who submit loads of this on ePHOTOzine that works really well.
I think you have some excellent rim light, love the tree on the left in the background too, and the flare. What doesn't work for me is the crop. If this is about an engagement it's about two people and you've lost the personalities by cropping off their heads. Although I assume your idea is all about the rings, so go in closer so you see them. I feel it's caught between two worlds in a place that doesn't work.
G6DDS Plus
6 231 Scotland
18 Jun 2011 5:30PM
Thanks Pete. thats all i was needing to hear really, the crop and the lighting.
peterjones 14 4.3k 1 United Kingdom
19 Jun 2011 11:07AM
Contrary to most I quite like the crop but I would have been more adventurous by cropping the top third of the image from just above the highlight under Jo's armpit to the bottom of the picture; for me the personality of the couple is plainly evident in the clasp of the hands.

The image clearly does of course suffer technically and there is a danger that you get so caught up within creativity that you leave out some aspects of technique; however much much worse still is to get caught up in the bounds of technique that you omit creativity; the lighting and emotion makes the picture and you are getting my vote to encourage your creativity.

Peter.
G6DDS Plus
6 231 Scotland
19 Jun 2011 11:34AM
Thanks Peter.
The more i look at this now i do feel myself that i could have cropped a little lower as you can see a little of Emma's neck and too much of her shoulder. I try to be different and won't stop.

iain

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