Back Modifications (2)
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End of the line.

By Jazzyjack
Hopefully all of the leaves will not distract from the main focus, I didnt wish to remove them as I think it adds to the dereliction of the line.

Tags: General Close-up and macro

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rambler Plus
8 703 14 England
15 Dec 2011 10:20PM
Well seen and well titled.

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Jestertheclown 8 7.4k 249 England
16 Dec 2011 11:19AM
I rather like this.
I have however, cropped it and cooled the colours slightly.
Please see my mod.
Just a thought.
SueEley 10 279 96 Wales
16 Dec 2011 6:18PM
I do like this. I didn't realise what it was but my husband looked over my shoulder and said, 'Is that a railway? Did they cut it off?' Intriguing. I think by converting to mono, you can have your cake and eat it too..... the plants are still there, but the tones are harmonious. I did a low contrast mono mod, but, of course, that's just my take on it. Any number of other ways to go, probably (high contrast mono, for example!)
pamelajean Plus
10 969 1832 United Kingdom
16 Dec 2011 10:02PM
Good placement of the line, Lee. I like the modification with the bright top cropped, but also agree that mono is a good way to go with this. It's different, interesting and well captured.
paulbroad 9 116 1064 United Kingdom
17 Dec 2011 4:02PM
I really do like the idea and composition, but the background is far too bright and pulls the eye badly. Expose for the background and lighten the shadows later, or try balancing a correctly exposed background with a flash lit foreground.


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