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By youmightlikethis
another shot at light n shade

Tags: Street Shadow play

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mrswoolybill Plus
14 2.5k 2346 United Kingdom
13 Jan 2021 8:49AM
It works for me, the strong elements are the diagonal rising from bottom left and the gap between one foot and the shadow. I've uploaded a modification playing on those factors.

Settings and processing look fine to me here.
Moira
chase Plus
15 2.0k 517 England
13 Jan 2021 11:23AM
Nice diagonal from the shadows.
Your processing is much stronger here to better effect.
dudler Plus
17 1.5k 1778 England
13 Jan 2021 11:42AM
I agree with all of the above.

Nice work.
13 Jan 2021 3:32PM
thanks for crits and comment
martin.w Plus
18 603 27 United Kingdom
13 Jan 2021 4:43PM
Love the fact you have three people almost bang in line.....and that all of their shadows are captured too. It is a bit soft, surprising given the brightness/aperture/shutter speed, though that may be down to camera shake.....and given the lowish ISO there is quite a lot of 'noise', especially on the nearest ladies coat.....possibly down to converting jpeg?
dark_lord Plus
16 2.7k 738 England
13 Jan 2021 7:48PM
It's a nice line of three and nicely processed.

However it is soft as Martin points out. If you did quickly move the camera up to take the image movement may have been an issue even at that shutter speed. But It looks more like focus error to me. Given this is a square image we know it's cropped but we don't know by how much as you havn't said or uploaded the original. Severe cropping will exacerbate any softness as I'm sure you're aware.

My mod makes use of a Levels adjustment to help the highlights avoid looking grey. I applied some sharpening too.

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