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FabioKeiner 7 111 1 Austria
8 Aug 2020 8:30AM
excellent
Charming GrinGrinGrinGrin
8 Aug 2020 8:42AM
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please, see mod 1
8 Aug 2020 8:44AM
A very thoughtful expression captured here, John. Posed for or not? I wonder.

JohnSmile
8 Aug 2020 8:47AM
Excellent set, John with the lead just ahead for me. I like Leo's Mod 1 as well.
Mike
ugly Plus
12 9 57 United Kingdom
8 Aug 2020 8:49AM
Love the tones and the 3D effect with great control of light.
Well done.
Regards Dave
jacomes Plus
5 26 22 Portugal
8 Aug 2020 9:16AM
Lovely portrait John. I prefer the two versions with the plain background (your layers work?) even if a bit of hair detail is lost. The mono version has handled the tonal range better, the highlights in the colour (V2) seem just a wee bit too strong. (more layers work?)
James
dudler Plus
17 1.3k 1717 England
8 Aug 2020 9:39AM
James, the mono version was done because the highlights were a bit bright...
johnke Plus
7 223 16 England
8 Aug 2020 9:42AM
I think the slightly tighter crop with the mono Image has made your model much more dramatic, it seems to bring out more detail especially to her skin and face, maybe some would soften her face a little but I like the detail just as it is.....John
DaveRyder Plus
6 4.7k 7 United Kingdom
8 Aug 2020 10:17AM
John,
Added a mod - which I like to take full credit for but really it was the facial/portrait tools in Luminar 4.

I've played with the following tools, all slightly;
Smoothed skin
Reduced facial shine
Enhanced lips
Enhanced eyes

I've not altered any colours, contrasts, tones etc and this time stayed away from the boarders.... Smile

Hope you like the output.

Dave
Alfie_P Plus
13 743 2 United Kingdom
8 Aug 2020 10:36AM
An evocative expression and beautiful image John. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
The mod I have added reflects how I feel about that expression aligned with your excellent title.

😎
bliba Plus
14 2 Austria
8 Aug 2020 11:01AM
Mono for me - a fine portrait
chase Plus
15 1.8k 457 England
8 Aug 2020 11:29AM
Well, Mr D. what a learning curve for you, don't worry, the pain will pass, a hint of Savlon and take a course of anti bionics, just incase Wink

I can see all the work you have done on this, well done, impressive for your first go with both editing tools.
Love her far away expression and Alfies mod really enhances that.
I like the lighting on her face again, I think Alfies mod really shows that off.
Congrats.......needs an award for all your effort, so, have mine Smile
dales Plus
4 11 Australia
8 Aug 2020 12:24PM
Excellent portrait of this beautiful subject John (all three) !!
Ian
Nikonuser1 Plus
8 165 16 United Kingdom
8 Aug 2020 1:36PM
A great mono portrait RonSmileSmileSmile

Cliff
mac Plus
19 8 Scotland
8 Aug 2020 2:35PM
A great portrait John, but I just had to have a got at it. Worked on the eyes a little.
Ian
GeorgeP Plus
13 62 26 United States
8 Aug 2020 2:50PM
A wonderful mono with a title, pose and expression straight out of the 50s propaganda schools.
I confess when I clicked on the email link I was thinking the title might refer to one of your signature studies clad only in a surgical mask. Grin
8 Aug 2020 3:24PM
A beautiful portrait, I like all the versions, version 1 is my favourite.
JuBarney Plus
9 33 5 United Kingdom
8 Aug 2020 5:19PM
Hard to pick a fav. but perhaps V2.
Ju
A pensive portrait, John.....my preference the lead.....shot about the same time as your oft her photos with Mollee?

Peter
dudler Plus
17 1.3k 1717 England
9 Aug 2020 6:56AM
My previous shot of Mollee was taken a week ago: this one was shot last Friday, 7 days after the first session.
clicknimagine Plus
10 713 101 India
9 Aug 2020 1:03PM
Beautiful close up...

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