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2 Feb 2009 5:03PM
Well done with setting this up. You have a real advantage over the rest who dont have your tallent. I think you can loose a bit of that extra window frame above. Use the next frame above her head to "frame" the image top and the last window frame to the left to "frame" that side. The long dress will start at the bottom of your image and the viewers eyes will follow it up to her face. The timber frame will keep your eyes in the image and without the extra timber on top of your image, you wont get lost in the extra space but can focus on the subject? IMHO

What does every1 else think?
Lourens
Thiternik 15 2 Mauritius
2 Feb 2009 7:36PM
Thank you very much for your comment.
Actually I don't like cropping my photos. I just sometimes make them square. In some cases I would agree with you - but that will not be by composition anymore. I really like using space in my works, and it is a part of me and my work - space, lines, light.. Anyway thanks a lot. I really appreciate getting this type of commentsSmile


Quote:Well done with setting this up. You have a real advantage over the rest who dont have your tallent. I think you can loose a bit of that extra window frame above. Use the next frame above her head to "frame" the image top and the last window frame to the left to "frame" that side. The long dress will start at the bottom of your image and the viewers eyes will follow it up to her face. The timber frame will keep your eyes in the image and without the extra timber on top of your image, you wont get lost in the extra space but can focus on the subject? IMHO

What does every1 else think?
Lourens

Diana 15 2.0k 19 Netherlands
3 Feb 2009 12:04AM
I think it is beautiful but also think you could lose the top window and give more to the flowing material at the bottom

still fab creative work all round of course

Diana

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