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trying to bring out smile in the eyes
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Looks good to me, as does the post processing. Yes. there is also a smile in the eyes, and this can make a real difference. Suggestions; tighter crop and take out the shadow area just above the models left side.
Nice shot, but some off the top, left and bottom to tighten up considerably.
The smile comes over well - a really heart warming image and I can't offer any suggestions to improve it
This is nicely done, Derek, and quite enigmatic with the fan across the mouth. I like the idea of the smile being in the eyes. There are a few minor adjustments that I would like to suggest, and which I have made in my modification. The spots on the dress are distracting, so I cloned them out. There are some dark areas within the shadow behind the head, and I cloned these out also. The eyes are the subject, so I selectively sharpened them. There is a dark area where the fan is covering the corner of the girl's smile and, at first glance, I thought you were showing a little bit of the smile/mouth. Looking more closely, it's the "shadow of the smile" behind the edge of the lace of the fan that is causing the dark area, so I removed that as well.
thank you for all your comments i have just started in portraits and welcome all your helpful ways of inproving my work
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