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First Light

By Philo  
The second effort from my short and frantic stop off at Ilkley Moor. Thanks again for all that gave the time to offer feedback on the previous shot and I look forward to your comments again.
Phil

Tags: Rocks Sunrise Clouds Colours Ilkley moor Landscape and travel

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tmann 11 4 2 United States
14 Oct 2011 2:42PM
stunning!!!!!!!!!!

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franken Plus
14 4.0k 4 Wales
14 Oct 2011 3:08PM
Superb!

Ken
ColouredImages 12 47 35 United Kingdom
14 Oct 2011 3:17PM
Worth the quick dash, this is stunning. Love the way the light hits the rocks and splits off into those bright orange shafts 10/10
Mike
Philo 6 99 83 England
14 Oct 2011 4:13PM
Many thanks guys, your comments are appreciated.
Phil
h4rsx 6 17 5 United Kingdom
14 Oct 2011 5:05PM
Nice shot, and a cracking sky. My only minor critique would be that the blend between the sky and land is telling. it might be worth blending this in subtly with a brush and build it up so that the transition is smoother.
Philo 6 99 83 England
14 Oct 2011 5:52PM

Quote:Nice shot, and a cracking sky. My only minor critique would be that the blend between the sky and land is telling. it might be worth blending this in subtly with a brush and build it up so that the transition is smoother.


Thanks for the feedback I will have another look at the blend.

Phil
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3558 Canada
15 Oct 2011 6:23PM
If theres blending Phil, is this then a compilation of more than one shot? Just curious about how its constructed.

All you need then is Moses with the tablets and its off to Hollywood!


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Philo 6 99 83 England
15 Oct 2011 11:00PM
Sorry Willie, I normally put in the description if the shot is blended. This is 2 exposures: one for the sky and the other the foreground. Having looked at the shot again it isn't quite a blending issue as such; the exposure for the rocks has produced a halo, presumably due to backlighting. I have now resolved this and will probably give this another airing in the main gallery.
Can't believe you haven't offered a modTongue
Phil
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3558 Canada
16 Oct 2011 3:27PM
Wanted to check first Phil, so I know what Im up against!


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