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First Wedding

By Wayne47
Hi, its been some time since my last up load, I was asked to shoot my first wedding this weekend & I must admit I really enjoyed it.

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Comments


Paul Morgan 20 19.5k 6 England
6 May 2008 5:11PM
For a first attempt you have done very well.

I would loose the table and flowers in the foreground by cropping, there adding very little.

It also looks a little like the bride is about to topple over on the groom, so a little straightening would sort this out.
Wayne47 15 43 United Kingdom
6 May 2008 9:44PM
Thanks for the advice, Im going to be sending them on a DVD slide show after the weekend I will take on board your comments & up date.

Kind Regards Wayne
RosaB 14 61 2 Greece
7 May 2008 7:51AM
I like the pose of the couple and the expressions on their faces! Well captured!
However I agree with Paul above about straightening and cropping and have uploaded a mod for you! Perhaps you had intended the shot to be at an angle? I have straightened it as much as possible but the pillar in the background is still not verticle as it would have meant chopping the grooms head off! I have cropped out the table and just left a few flowers.
I would also suggest cloning out the buttonhole of the guest onthe left as it does distract the eye
Glad you enjoyed you first wedding shoot!
Hope this helps
Rosalie
NickParry 16 1.0k 79 Wales
10 May 2008 4:00PM
Done a mod to show what I would do. Basically it needed straightening but I have also done a bit of cloning, and conversion to BW etc etc.

Nick

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