Five Fells by Ingleman

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banehawi Plus

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28 Feb 2010 10:10PM

I think its a very nice shot.

I think the tree at the rhs is a little intrusive, especially with one of the branches nearest the lens being blurred, so Ive removed it in my mod.

Otherwise just some curves, saturation increase and a little contrast.

Regards

Willie

Ingleman 10 9 4

1 Mar 2010 8:35PM

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Quote:I think its a very nice shot.

I think the tree at the rhs is a little intrusive, especially with one of the branches nearest the lens being blurred, so Ive removed it in my mod.

Otherwise just some curves, saturation increase and a little contrast.

Regards

Willie

Many thanks Willie, I agree about the tree but was in a tight spot where I couldn't go past the hedge to eliminate the intrusion.

Nice to hear from you,

Cheers.
Andy

newfocus 11 647 2

1 Mar 2010 9:38PM

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I like the overall scene but it seems a little under exposed. The curves adjustment already suggested should help with that, or you can do a quick fix by dragging in the right hand slider in levels. It looks worth the effort to get that right.

Ingleman 10 9 4

1 Mar 2010 10:12PM

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Quote:I like the overall scene but it seems a little under exposed. The curves adjustment already suggested should help with that, or you can do a quick fix by dragging in the right hand slider in levels. It looks worth the effort to get that right.

Thanks!

Andy

PaulLiley 8 2 13

22 Mar 2010 1:27PM

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Love the light half way up the fell side and the cloud on the tops adds to the atmosphere. Know the area well and I'd say its a great effort. More please. Paul

Ingleman 10 9 4

22 Mar 2010 8:37PM

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Quote:Love the light half way up the fell side and the cloud on the tops adds to the atmosphere. Know the area well and I'd say its a great effort. More please. Paul

Thanks Paul...more to come.

Andy