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Hi Gary,
I see what you mean about it being abstract, and I fully agree that an image doesn't have to be technically perfect in order to be enjoyed. However, you did mark this for Critique, so I assume that you are in for suggestions.
Well, the first thing about this image that struck me was that there was quite a lot of unnecessary (almost) empty space. So I made you a modification for which I cropped the image. The light-coloured line at the bottom doesn't do anything useful for the image, so I cropped that off, and cropped a little from all sides. I was in two minds about the smaller wiggly line on the left, but in the end decided to leave it in, but you could also decide to concentrate on the bigger subject and crop everything else off - cropping results in a more striking image, imho. I also upped colour saturation somewhat. I hope this helps - see what you think of it...
I see what you mean about it being abstract, and I fully agree that an image doesn't have to be technically perfect in order to be enjoyed. However, you did mark this for Critique, so I assume that you are in for suggestions.
Well, the first thing about this image that struck me was that there was quite a lot of unnecessary (almost) empty space. So I made you a modification for which I cropped the image. The light-coloured line at the bottom doesn't do anything useful for the image, so I cropped that off, and cropped a little from all sides. I was in two minds about the smaller wiggly line on the left, but in the end decided to leave it in, but you could also decide to concentrate on the bigger subject and crop everything else off - cropping results in a more striking image, imho. I also upped colour saturation somewhat. I hope this helps - see what you think of it...