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Fly 2

By saeidNL
Morning everyone

Thank you for all your comments on last upload, its all very much appreciated.

BEST LARGE IF YOU HAVE TIME

saeid

Tags: Pentax General Tamron Wildlife and nature Saeid Klick

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.

Comments


15 Mar 2010 12:08AM
A great aerodynamic shape for this goose. Great capture and very nice position of the wings for this bird, Congrats!

Dan

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morpheus1955 9 3 2 United Kingdom
15 Mar 2010 12:10AM
Good morning Saeid, what a super image, very well timed and captured.

Hugh
colmar Plus
8 42 35 Scotland
15 Mar 2010 12:12AM
Morning Saeid , a cracking image so well captured in flight the detail is grand perhaps another as per the mod will show the flying into the space rather than in the centre but it is just an idea as opposed to critiscism of the image in and of itself Colin
andylea 7 37 1 United Kingdom
15 Mar 2010 12:17AM
a brailliant well timed capture nice one Wink
andy
heids Plus
6 1 1 Scotland
15 Mar 2010 12:17AM
Fantastic image, well timed and taken.
15 Mar 2010 12:40AM
great image! well captured
15 Mar 2010 6:18AM
saeidNL you have no doubt taken this shot very well, as well as i should say it is not an easy task to do, but as you have send it to the critique gallery i should try to give you some points which you can consider, i agree with Colin, that you could have cropped the left side blank space, placing the subject at the center is not generally the best thing,

i should also suggest you to correct the white balance because an yellowish cast is visible, the bird should be pure white,

many members can beat me, if i say, you could have cropped the blank space at the right side irrespective of the rules, so that the bird appears to be going out side the frame, and give a title like "The End of the Day",

wish you best of luck...
15 Mar 2010 8:53AM
Nice capture Saeid. David
A Booth 13 11 4 United Kingdom
15 Mar 2010 8:54AM
well timed and executed capture. as suggested a tighter crop might improve, a nice image all the same.
Lillian Plus
6 21 16 United Kingdom
15 Mar 2010 11:33AM
A well got bird in flight and you have done the corrections well in your mod
Lillian
great flight shot spot on a tighter crop and leave well alone
jj
15 Mar 2010 12:26PM
Awesome capture
P
15 Mar 2010 3:58PM
A fabulous in-flight capture, Saeid.
Roy
Great in-flight action capture - perhaps crop a bit tighter to increase the size of the subject and trim the left side 'redundant' space - effective shot.
Pat
15 Mar 2010 6:42PM
yes a good crop either both sides or just the left would have helped here. But back to the shot not easy, to get this, as well as you have. Great timing and focus click
norton 12 6 United Kingdom
15 Mar 2010 8:11PM
Nicely timed capture Saied.................

Tony.
jools59 Plus
6 4 1 United Kingdom
15 Mar 2010 8:23PM
Nice shot...Jools
Jestertheclown Plus
7 7.1k 249 England
15 Mar 2010 8:42PM
A few problems with this as you'll see if you look at my mods.
They're the best I can do unfortunately.
I should have said; all work was carried out using CS2.
Jester.
15 Mar 2010 9:44PM
Super well timed capture.
Ridgeway Plus
9 222 2 Ireland
15 Mar 2010 9:46PM
Lovely timed shot,
Gives a great sence of speed,
Very nice,

Aidan,,
Fabulous image Saeid.
Tony
15 Mar 2010 11:54PM
Great Image,well caught
gerrymac Plus
8 10 1 United Kingdom
16 Mar 2010 1:46PM
Super timing...love it
Gerry
17 Mar 2010 2:39PM
Beautiful capture. You have even got its shadow.
I would suggest some change in the background colour and cropping both sides.
- Swamiji
Great image well taken
The only thing that I could say is next time try tracking the bird across the frame to blur the background and this will add movement
31 Mar 2010 10:45PM
wow what an excelent in flight capture of this goose excelent photograpy skills thanks for shareing this awesome image
Darren41

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