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I'm going to have difficulty here. Completely the wrong viewpoint for me. You needed the sun directly behind him and a low viewpoint to get rid of all that clutter. Remember, I'm not into BMX and am thus looking at it as a photographer, not at a bike website. The flash has had minimal effect. I would have either strengthened the flash or gone for a full silhouette - after changing my viewpoint.
Paul
Paul
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hi paul thanks for the advice, but you wernt to know but the fence doesnt allow me to get the sun right behind him, also the sun going behind the building ment when i was lower you couldent bike aswell. also i did not use a flash in this photo. but i did want the sun to be directly it was just not possible with the fence