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Free Kick

By Chaps
Sunday afternoon soccer game in Spanish neighborhood

Tags: Football General Youth Sports Specialist and abstract Kick Soccer Sports and action

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20 Jan 2008 11:47PM
Hi Randy, you have captured the action well here. Good sharp focus. I would however be tempted to crop a little of the bottom, certainly crop out the shadow. Nice one like it


Colin
CathR 15 151 564 United Kingdom
21 Jan 2008 11:30AM
The action comes across well and the lighting is good. However what spoils it for me is the person standing in the background. For me it really interferes with the main action. But certainly has lots of potential.

Catherine
Tooth 17 5.8k 227 Ireland
23 Jan 2008 12:30AM
very quirky and the ction is captured very well, especially the almost-touching of the ball and the foot. i agree about a crop from the bottom, that bit isn't contributing anything. you could also try and crop from the right and lose the goalpost, and really concentrating on the feet and the ball. The post is quite distractindg as it is and dcompetes for attention with the other elements - there's enough of the netting in the background to keep the goalpost theme

Just my thoughts, nice work either way..

Stephen
Chaps 14 Spain
24 Jan 2008 7:54AM
Thanks for the good feedback...anything to sharpen my new hobby...

Randy

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