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By shydallah
self portrait:timer not find some one interested to stand infront of me in this picture.pls,coment is this picture is ok?

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aeras 4 6 Cyprus
8 Jun 2012 7:55PM
mohammad hi,

I find that posing is ok and cropping is good considering is a self portrait.
By using your on camera flash and your lens near its wider setting , you have created a somehow flat portrait that looks like a snapshot.
your shutter speed reads half a second (I cannot guess why is set so low , maybe the camera is set on night mode?) and even with an aperture of f:8 , slow shutter speed may be the reason for loosing detail , due to movement.
Lastly the dark patches on your shirt draw the eye of someone looking at your portrait away from you face.

Next time , if possible, get a bit away from the background , use a longer focal setting , avoid on camera flash and try to use natural light (Window light ?)

Take care

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pablophotographer 5 678 269
9 Jun 2012 10:09AM
For me this is a complete recovery from all the mistakes of the previous portrait photographs you had taken in horizontal rather than vertical setting. I shall bypass the fact that you had not responded to my mail or comments on your last portrait photograph and I shall congratulate you for this new beginning in photography and in life in general. All the best shydallah. I wish you live long and make yourself proud and people happy with nice pictures.
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3531 Canada
9 Jun 2012 4:04PM
Its nice to see the man behind the lens Muhammad!

The shot can do with sharpening and contrast as in my mod. Look like its very hot there!


paulbroad 9 116 1064 United Kingdom
9 Jun 2012 9:04PM
This is a pretty good formal pleasant portrait. It just needs a touch more contrast and, whilst reasonably sharp, it needs to be pin sharp. Male portraits are almost always best very sharp indeed - it suits the male face.

11 Jun 2012 11:00AM
my special thanks to all for your coments on my self photo.fedup from the hot to shoot nicely.
i hope i can do my picture this time i am regularly in work place.for the last six years i could not work regularly due to my illness.about my self portrait,there was time once my picture was looking excellent and attractive while i was 18 or 20years present i am 62 years and 5 month old.last 6 years i did not get courage to shoot my self portrait.even i afraid when i saw my shadow on the god after recovered from illness all my friends here joking i am looking like a young man.all my family member in my country are very happy when they saw my live video.
i am really greatfull to all of you for ever.all of you wishes my quick recovery from the illness.
best regards
pablophotographer 5 678 269
13 Jun 2012 10:21PM
Well, you don't look your age shydallah; enjoy life , fsmily, friends and photography as much as you can.
14 Jun 2012 12:08PM
hi,pablophotographer.thank you so much for yor coment.
i hope next time y7ou could find some my self portrait.problem no one near me to hold the camera vartically.any way i will try again self timer shoot.
best regards

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