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By shydallah
macro shoot,flower and butterfly.
pls,coment if something is not correct.
shahidullah

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aeras 4 6 Cyprus
28 Jun 2012 7:12PM
mohammad Hi ,

First I find the angle of the butterfly strange , almost like the frame is wrongly rotated, also the large green leaf on the left , another on top and flowers at right , compete for attention with the butterfly , so one has for a moment to look and find where is that butterfly.

A much tighter crop could remove some of the distractions and make the viewer concentrate more easily on you main subject.
Other than that , your aperture and speed was good enough for capturing in detail your subject.

Take care

Charles

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SueEley 10 279 96 Wales
28 Jun 2012 7:15PM
Nice picture of the insect, and it looks pretty sharp, though not bitingly sharp. Better to avoid backgrounds with a lot going on if possible, and might look better flipped to face the other way.

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