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George

By Oliverpants
Taken in the garden against a dark yew hedge in natural evening light.
Taken on a Canon 6D with a 70 - 200 lens at 183mm. F4, 1/500, iso.100

I have not uploaded a photo for quite some time, but I will try to upload more often.


Tags: Portrait Dog Rough collie Pastoral Pets and captive animals Sable

Comments


mrswoolybill Plus
15 3.0k 2465 United Kingdom
27 Dec 2020 2:32PM
Hi Ann, I don't remember you ticking the critique box before, at least not for a long time. I wonder if there are any aspects here that you are not satisfied with, that you want advice on?

As I see it, it's a super image and would do well for votes and awards in the main gallery. It has a dignity and elegance. And it's taken with care, the settings look spot on to me.

My only suggestions are regarding proportions and placement. I've uploaded a modification (find it under the blue Modifications button below your upload). A bit lest space at the top, to raise the eyes in the frame to around 1/3 down from the top; less canvass on the left and more on the right, for George to look into.. He's a bit central in the original, which does not work so well with the 3/4 face. And I did a bit of very gentle dodging on highlights in that eye.

Just suggestions, because that's what we are here for - but it really is a very good upload.
Regards,
Moira
banehawi Plus
17 2.6k 4274 Canada
27 Dec 2020 3:04PM
Hi Anne.

A really beautiful shot of a gorgeous George. I agree with Moira, a real show stopper. I would also place it a bit differently, the near eye more to the left; fill in some black on the right side where theres a faint bleed through of the background; lift the shadow detail in the eye so it sparkles.

The image was uploaded with the Adobe RGB colour profile, remember to convert to sRGB before uploading, it can make a difference to some browsers.

Ive done this in the mod, and slightly altered the overall tone by reducing red saturation a touch while increasing yellow.


Well done.


regards


Willie
dudler Plus
18 1.7k 1884 England
27 Dec 2020 3:52PM
I don't have anything much to add, other than that the position George has in the frame affects the mood. As you posted the picture, I see him watchful, looking way outside the frame for possible danger. Moira and Willie have given him an easier look, less watchful, perhaps.

I'm not a dog-lover, and I've never owned a dog. But I have made friends with one or two belonging to human friends, and I think I would love to meet George.

If this wasn't in the Critique Gallery, I'd very probably give it a user award. It is that good.
pamelajean Plus
15 1.6k 2238 United Kingdom
27 Dec 2020 5:35PM
Hello, Ann, and welcome to the Critique Gallery.

We don't tend to get images as good as this uploaded here, and I feel sure this would do well in the main Photo Gallery. Is there anything you particularly wanted comments on, or help with?

The main suggestions have been dealt with above and the modifications look very good. You have a very attractive companion and model, make the most of George, he is going to be very popular on the site.

Pamela.

Oliverpants 12 2 2 England
27 Dec 2020 6:55PM
Thank you so much, your help has been great to get me back to thinking photographer not Rough Collie breed of dog, I had taken the photo for a profile picture of the dog to show the good points of his breeding, which include a dark eye with no hint of pale pigmentation. With that in mind I had lost sight (pun not intended) of how the overall image would be viewed by people not obsessed with the breed.
The original uncropped image sits well, with lots of room to the right for George to look into. So at least I can re crop it and adjust the light to enhance.
Thank you.
mrswoolybill Plus
15 3.0k 2465 United Kingdom
27 Dec 2020 9:53PM
Thanks for your feedback, Ann, it makes all the difference here.
Moira
chataignier Plus
8 208 10 France
28 Dec 2020 9:57AM
Nothing to add except that I love the portrait - a beautiful dog very well photographed !
David
chase Plus
16 2.3k 591 England
28 Dec 2020 10:42AM
Hi Ann and a warm welcome from me too.
George is lovely and you have really done him proud here.
Speaking as a dog show judge, he has a lovely kind expression, good colour, a nice dark eye and lovely ear placement.
You have the eye nearest to us nicely in focus which drops off well.

I did add a mod, gave him more space on the right as is the general consensus, cropped a touch from the left to put him in a better position in the frame.
Added a touch of sharpening to really show off the super 'Collie' texture of his coat.
Brightened very slightly and converted to sRGB.
26 Jul 2021 9:43PM
Hello, I have just joined EPZ and this is my first comment under the critique section. I am writing because I love the image and we had our own Sheltie for 14 years. They are noble dogs who love to show-off. If you do take other images of your gorgeous dog, I would try the direct eye look at the owner, which can bring out an owner / dog connection. I like taking shots of our King Charles Spaniel running towards me with his long ears flying. Another alternative for a great image

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