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By comma
I do very few images of people and when I do I am less than confident on what I want and what works and what doesn't, so would welcome some critique on this one. Some detail. The image was informal, there was no lighting used of any kind. The aim was to take an image that looked natural and relaxed.

The final piece of info is the young model is my daughter and she hates getting her photo taken!!

Tags: Portraits and people

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.

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Carabosse Plus
13 40.1k 269 England
17 Jun 2008 1:01AM
Delightful looking child. You have got most of the elements right here. However your daughter needs to be separated more from the background. The skin tone looks a bit on the 'cool' side.

I've uploaded a mod, which attempts to address these issues, for you to consider.

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comma 8 108 6 United Kingdom
17 Jun 2008 10:06PM
Thanks for the comments, I appreciate it greatly. I agree the mod does give the image more depth and improves the skin tones considerably.

stuart

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