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Glen Etive rocks!

By Bigpoolman
The uncropped version of yesterday's upload. Very interested in which one people prefer and naturally any comments / suggestions.

Thanks

Tim

Tags: Scotland Glencoe Winter Glenetive Landscape and travel 2017

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dudler Plus
17 1.6k 1841 England
11 Feb 2017 9:58PM
Coming straight from the cropped version you posted yesterday...

There are several shots in here waiting to be isolated... This is a slight miss, partly because of the tonal stuff (Moira's mod yesterday added just enough punch, and this needs a simiilar breathing on), and partly because the framing doesn't quite work, for me.

I love the reverse S-curve of the pool, and the way that the shapes behind continue the wavy motion.

And i think I see what y ouwere aiming for, with diagonal lines going into both bottom corners. However, the cut-off pool on the left spoils the idea for me - I actually want to find out what moving a foot to the right and excluding it does - what it opens up on the right.

I don't know, so I'll crop, making a slightly uneasy semi-panoramic vertical frame.

Adventurous, in weather that must have felt cutting to the bone!
mrswoolybill Plus
14 2.8k 2404 United Kingdom
12 Feb 2017 9:06AM
I looked at this yesterday, and couldn't quite formulate my thoughts. John has done that for me.

The foreground pool is a fabulous shape, and portrait format follows it up through the frame. So this doesn't need the various distractions on the left. Stick to the main story.

Boost contrast just a wee bit. It can work wonders for foreground textures, make them tactile, immediate. And then b&w.
Moira
12 Feb 2017 9:31AM
All makes sense thanks.

The cunning plan was to have the two diagonals coming from the bottom corners and the line of green rocks from the top left. S bend of pools take you through the picture to the river and columns of rocks beyond.

Having crammed everything in as usual, I suppose thats why I cropped it to the other version.

You can see a different angle which I have uploaded as a mod, which I think is cleaner and simpler.


mrswoolybill Plus
14 2.8k 2404 United Kingdom
12 Feb 2017 10:34AM
I do like your version. We are gradually moving away from the bigger picture and into the abstract.

These uploads have actually made me want to visit Glen Etive, the big set-piece landscapes have never done that for me. Too much, too remote...
12 Feb 2017 10:57AM
Thanks. This one was only a couple of feet away from the previous and I took this one specifically for the shapes, as opposed to the colours of the other one.
There were plenty of other images to capture, brilliant location.
dudler Plus
17 1.6k 1841 England
12 Feb 2017 11:51AM
I've been back to my pictures from June 2014... Was this (see new 'mod') the place?

And looking at my shot, we were obviously thinking along fairly similar lines, compositionally...
12 Feb 2017 12:24PM
Hard to say John, I don't think its quite the same place. I was prob 10 mins or so drive down Glen Etive from the Buachaille, near the top end of the gorge and before you get to the fenced off area.

I am only guessing but your image looks like a bit lower down the river based on the far bank looking lower. Its all nice though, I like the shape of the pool that you have captured.

Tim
dudler Plus
17 1.6k 1841 England
12 Feb 2017 5:08PM
We'd set off up the sideroad, and reached a point that seemed QUITE far enough up a single-track road for non-walkers. You can - if you know it's there - see the road heading on up the Glen in my picture, up on the right. There's a telegraph post beside it...
12 Feb 2017 6:02PM
Ah ok, not been up the side road. One for next time maybe.

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