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golden rose

By NeilWigan
this is from some shots i did when i was first trying to learn about the camera 3-4 months ago .It looks good to me but i am open to ideas on improvement.

Tags: Flowers Roses Flowers and plants

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RonnieAG Plus
8 154 118 Scotland
20 Aug 2010 12:17AM
Lovely shot of the rose but perhaps just lacking contrast...I have offered a slight modification...not sure if you'll approve, Neil.

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debu 7 India
20 Aug 2010 12:17AM
Lovely image with beautiful detail and colour.
LexEquine 11 19 United States
20 Aug 2010 2:29AM
Excellent capture & image rendering, Neil, with fine color, clarity, & comp. I think that Ronnie's modification is superb, & really complements the "photographic impact," of your image. Regards...LEx
Davesumner 10 28 300 Australia
20 Aug 2010 3:44AM
Hi Neil,

What a great job you've done here with the composition and colours and the sharpness and DoF are brilliant. I really like this shot a lot and I think given that you say you're learning about the camera, you've done brilliantly. You've also handled the composition really well.

If I have to offer you any advice it is to focus more on that beautiful flower and not so much the background. You could even crop this square and get right in close.

Again this is a stunning shot and I think you go and find something like this again and try some more, I reckon if you can do this whilst you're learning then you'd have stunning effects when you are more experienced. Maybe a few more water droplets would be pleasing to the eye as well.

Hope this helps

20 Aug 2010 4:03AM

Quote:Lovely shot of the rose but perhaps just lacking contrast...I have offered a slight modification...not sure if you'll approve, Neil.

Hi Neil , I do agree with Ronnie. other than this it is fantastic.
20 Aug 2010 4:18AM
Beautiful image Neil - wonderful rose. Ronnies slight adjustments has just brought out that bit more detail. But a beautiful shot, well done !

Ray42 9 3 England
20 Aug 2010 7:09AM
Beautiful - very well taken
20 Aug 2010 8:33AM
Brilliant shot with a great depth of field.

Nice colouring and i like the small drop of water
ChasD 8 4 2 United Kingdom
20 Aug 2010 8:33AM
Beautiful image, sharp and with good colour.

paulbroad 10 123 1200 United Kingdom
20 Aug 2010 11:06AM
This is basically a very competant image, but it does need that little brightness and contrast boost just to lift it and give a little impact. Easily done in software.

NeilWigan Plus
7 16 16 England
20 Aug 2010 11:21AM
Thank you everyone,it is encourageing to get comments and mods like this on pictures that i have tried as "Photography" as opposed to pictures taken just of what i see,if that makes any sense. Yours Neil and family.
lonely_oryx 10 61 55 England
20 Aug 2010 12:35PM
Beautiful texture
mondmagu 7 75 Ireland
20 Aug 2010 4:54PM
Very nice colouring Neil.

acousticmist 7 10 1 United Kingdom
20 Aug 2010 6:33PM
Super sharp shot.....Martin
Jestertheclown 9 7.6k 252 England
20 Aug 2010 9:53PM
As has been said, this is very dark and to me at least the rose itself looks a bit flat.
I've increased the tone, adjusted shadows/highlights, adjusted levels (the histogram was all to the left) increased brightness and contrast and sharpened.
I also got rid of the frame but that's a personal dislike.
All done in CS5.
I ran it through "Noiseware" as well.
20 Aug 2010 9:58PM
Beautiful image, love the water droplet too.
Maiwand 11 3 73 England
21 Aug 2010 1:08PM
Beautiful flower Neil.
Tooth 12 5.8k 227 Ireland
21 Aug 2010 11:00PM
agree with all the above v. useful points. I'd just like to say, as a proud exiled Blackpudlian, that the colour isn't really golden, but tangerine Smile

Nice work

23 Aug 2010 1:00PM
a very nice rose shot perhaps a sligh addition of some fill in light ...nice image click

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