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Irishkate Plus
9 41 116 United Kingdom
31 Jul 2018 9:45AM
Another from the Roaring 20's party!
Forgot to enable mods but not getting that under options - where do I find it?
Many thanks for V&C and award for Laughing Gangsters.
KateGrin

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31 Jul 2018 9:49AM
click on options just under your upload then click edit then click options and tick mods Box
31 Jul 2018 9:51AM
Looks fine to me Kate, excellent image.

JohnSmile
debu 9 India
31 Jul 2018 9:55AM
Very nice mono.
Debu
ColleenA Plus
7 441 6 Australia
31 Jul 2018 10:23AM
They fit the era Kate, excellent shot
Great eye contact in this B&W. Well done Kate.
WesternRed.
31 Jul 2018 10:55AM
very funny, great shot
Smile
31 Jul 2018 10:56AM
think this is good Kate as it is Kate they fit the bill nicely those two good work

Graham
TrevBatWCC Plus
11 13 13 England
31 Jul 2018 11:13AM
Think their meaner looking facial expressions suit the character more, and especially in mono too! Smile
Trev Smile
31 Jul 2018 11:25AM
Another top shot Kate , great expressions
Ian
Nikonuser1 Plus
7 161 16 United Kingdom
31 Jul 2018 11:47AM
Excellent Kate SmileSmile

Cliff
Joline Plus
13 30 54 United States
31 Jul 2018 12:38PM
I think you have the tones just right. Looks like a shady pair of blokesSmile
31 Jul 2018 1:33PM
Must have been something you said.
( Hard to offer any helpful thoughts without the original file, but quite honestly Kate it looks okay to me. Nothing wrong with it.
I'd probably darken the whole thing a bit, but that's just me.)
31 Jul 2018 2:09PM
A right couple of dodgy geezers Kate great portrait.

KennySmileSmileSmile
Mollycat Plus
6 21 2 United Kingdom
31 Jul 2018 4:14PM
Getting ready for the ' St.Valentines Day massacre ' Kate.
Peter GrinGrinGrin
dimalexa 3 2 Greece
31 Jul 2018 4:53PM
Excellent work, tone gradation is the most suitable for portraits. In Graham's modification the become more "hard", also as characters. In your original work they are more gentle, you choose and you get, Kate!
Also, glad for the 30th vote!
Dimitris
31 Jul 2018 7:27PM
Great shot Kate..Lin
GrinGrinGrinGrin
EMJAYCEE Plus
10 10 10 England
31 Jul 2018 9:46PM
Think you've upset this pair Kate Smile
Joan
Chinga Plus
9 3 1 United Kingdom
1 Aug 2018 2:25AM
Well executed mono Kate, but I wouldn't like to find those two on a dark street...
Isabel GrinGrinGrinGrin
RLF Plus
9 18 4 United Kingdom
1 Aug 2018 8:12AM
Smashing pair.
I do prefer the one rendered in Silver Effects because itís a little grittierSmile
With slightly different hats (ie boaters) they could be 2 FBI agentsWink
Rob
banehawi Plus
15 2.2k 4066 Canada
1 Aug 2018 3:13PM
Nice pose, but looks very washed out.

I uploaded a mod with some comments. However, it would be great if you could upload the colour original as your own mod. Its best to solve the colour cast issue first in the colour image.


Regards


Willie
banehawi Plus
15 2.2k 4066 Canada
1 Aug 2018 5:12PM
Thanks for the original Kate, - its very helpful.

So, - first, there is no colour cast at all, as the whites are white; of there was a colour cast, the whites woould have a tint the same colour as the colour cast. This is not something Ive judged by eye, - Ive measure it in Photoshop.

So, IF you are noticing any sort of strong cast, - I would calibrate whatever screen you are using to view it.

What I do see, - and this is completely typical for a Canon portrait, is that the colour Red is slightly exaggerated; this is how Canon does color, and all others have their own bias, - Nikon for example favours Green.

So, to correct this, I opened the colour balance tool; then set the Cyan/Red slider towars Cyan by 7; and with the blue/yellow slider, towards yellow by 5. This ave nme a better looking colour.

I hadnt noticed at first that you used flash, - so thats why the faces are very shiny!. So the mod has exposure decreased a little, highlights toned down also.

Ive loaded a colour, a mono, and a du tone mod. The mono is a fairly straight conversion in Photoshop, no fancy filters; it has the red slider and yellow slider pushed way towards the left; a duo tone is something that Photoshop can do easily, and if you want to explore it, its under Mode> Duotone; it works only with greyscale image, - and the result has to have the Mode set back to RGB.


Hope this helps



Regards


Williewell worth fiddling with.
Irishkate Plus
9 41 116 United Kingdom
2 Aug 2018 9:49AM
Big thank you to willie for all the useful advice.
Kate Grin
ColleenA Plus
7 441 6 Australia
2 Aug 2018 10:27AM
They look like hoods...great expressions Kate...we always learn so much from Willie

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