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Grave Girl

By b8wsa  
Gothic girl in a cemetary pose.

Tags: Goth Portrait Black Graveyard Girl Black and white Grave Cemetary Portraits and people

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colin 13 697 5 Scotland
25 Jul 2008 12:58PM
I like the selective colouring.

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culturedcanvas 12 4.7k 59 United Kingdom
25 Jul 2008 2:03PM
Recognise the model but this shot doesnt do her any favours. The natural framing actually is a good idea and does fit well but her dark hair blends into the background too much. I am liking the splash of colour on the wrist ... it does take your eye to it but it could have been used better to bring about the direction of the eye. I'd have positioned the model in a different location to be honest as the light isn't right here ... technically its not that bad for where youve shot her but maybe a 1/3 stop under exposed ... (you could argue that as a goth style shot theres nothing wrong with this though). It just doesn't have enough impact to or mood to work as it is.

That crit probably sounds a bit harsh but hopefully there's a few useful comments in there ....

Think I got an email from you the other day on one of the model sites by the way about locations to shoot??

b8wsa 9 United Kingdom
25 Jul 2008 2:37PM
Thanks for the input, yes I asked about derelict locations in the NorthEast, any info would be great
Ricky37 10 12
25 Jul 2008 5:03PM
Good shot , shame the tats looks so bad ..

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