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happiness

By dandoextreme
Taken during there first dance

Tags: Fashion Black and white Wedding and social Portraits and people

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banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3556 Canada
2 Sep 2009 8:57PM
Its a really nice shot, - great timing, and I especially like the diagonla made by the brides arm.

It might benefit with being lust a little brighter as in the mod, - and a little sharper. You often need to sharpen after you re size for uploading, so Im sure your original shot is sharper.

I would try cropping a little off the left also, - to me it looks more intimate.

Hope this is useful,


Regards



Willie

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NEWMANP Plus
8 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
2 Sep 2009 10:11PM
a great composition, lovely tight crop and excellent use of the diagonal line. the expressions are nice and the mono conversion is very nice and a good use of the filters to give pleasant skin tones.

may be the crops a little too tight around the top of the mans head and the whole thing could be a little sharper but that may be the upload and low res .

quite a nice shot and i expect a fav in the album
Phil
cassiecat 8 39 46 England
3 Sep 2009 7:21PM
like the intimacy of the tight crop, think willies brighter mod works really well.lesley
Lucian 6 562
1 Apr 2010 10:49PM
very intimate. i like it.

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