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Harbour Sunset

By justpat10
F14, 1/30s. ISO 100. Nikkor 18-55mm lens.

Torquay harbour taken June 2010 at 21.08

Tags: Sunset Harbour Torquay Boats Landscape and travel Night and low light

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11 Jan 2011 2:06PM
Lovely shot, amazing colour Smile
Ricky.

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pluffy 9 150 United Kingdom
11 Jan 2011 3:07PM
Superb colours, love the gentle ripples on the water, well done.
Steve.
11 Jan 2011 5:33PM
Over saturated..Bring it down a bit and try again....JT
NEWMANP 8 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
12 Jan 2011 11:21PM
the composition is fine but the overall feel is a little overcooked in the processing.
it looks to me as if the balance between the top and bottm halves required a grad filter around 2 stops to restore the correct relationship.

taking an average reading i guess has blocked up the shadows some which has been lifted in processing and then the saturation boosted just a bit too much.

so left with what we have now the suns gone down, i would suggest loading into photoshop or similar and the saturation lowering to a comfortable colour tone in the water and i suspect that will also assist losing the colour caste in the boats.

then on separate layer, eye drop the sky tone from the top left of frame and drop a grad of that colour from the top to fill in the overbright area top right. this can be blended to taste with the opacity slider before flattening the layers.

its still in there and just needs teasing out slightly differently.

regards
Phil

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