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Very good. You've managed to bring his eyes out of the darkness with those catchlights in them. The only thing I don't like is that the composition feels a little 'top-heavy'. If this is a crop of the original shot I would suggest going back to the original and including more in the frame at the bottom. If this is the frame straight out of camera I might suggest cropping about 1/5th off the top of frame; this would put your son's eyes close or on the top third horizontal line. This is a very good photo though - a nice moment captured - and although I don't normally like sepia toning, it works well here.
Geraint
Geraint