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By Philo  
I have really struggled to nail this type of shot so quite pleased to have finally got one. I like the inclusion of the other players as they provide context and show how high the lad has jumped. Can I be forgiven for chopping the Methley player's feet off?
As always I would really appreciate your views.
Phil

Tags: Jump Header Methley United Sports and action

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cats_123 Plus
16 5.0k 30 Northern Ireland
26 Mar 2013 7:35AM
well timed Smile
chase Plus
15 2.0k 514 England
26 Mar 2013 7:42AM
A difficult shot in what looks like quite harsh light.Well timed too.
I see you like the inclusion of the other players & I see why, but my first thought was to crop the lad in the air into a singular portrait frame as with the feet chopped off ( sorry) it makes the frame look a little unbalanced...without feet he is unbalanced too.
Timing is good & I like the bit of movement on the ball.
danh 11 61 36 United Kingdom
26 Mar 2013 8:02AM
Gloves and tights - whatever happened to the beautiful game?! Tongue
boov 8 2 United Kingdom
26 Mar 2013 8:56AM
Excellent take
Richsr 13 91 223 England
26 Mar 2013 9:02AM
Well timed and handled in what is harsh looking lighting.
would like to see a crop as Chase suggests
Regards Richard
Philo 10 99 83 England
26 Mar 2013 9:09AM
It seems that a crop to isolate the player is favourable so I will have a look at that and maybe upload again. Many thanks for the comments, everyone.
Phil
salopian 9 3 28 United Kingdom
26 Mar 2013 11:37AM
I think the other player's expressions are good so I would keep them in. They seem to show some sympathy for the lad heading the ball - "that looks painful"- and by his expression he seems to agree! Reminds me of playing, years ago, on cold, wet days with a heavy, soggy leather ball - got knocked out once.Sad
I like the image and the harsh lighting comes with low winter sun, so seems in context to me.

Geoff
salopian 9 3 28 United Kingdom
26 Mar 2013 11:48AM
I would keep the other players in as their expressions are priceless - "that looks painful!" and by the expression on the face of the header , he agrees! Reminds me of playing, years ago, on cold wet days, with a soggy, heavy leather ball - got knocked out onceSad
It is a great shot and I think the harsh light comes with the low winter sun and is appropriate.

Geoff
Philo 10 99 83 England
26 Mar 2013 4:06PM
Thanks, Geoff, it only hurts if you get it wrong....and we've all got it wrong at least once resulting in a nice headache! Having said that, a soggy leather ball probably hurts every time.
Phil
paulbroad 13 131 1290 United Kingdom
26 Mar 2013 6:16PM
That's it. Everything there, sharp, action, ball. Good stuff. What a head of hair. Nothing much wrong with this one. I was once hit in the face in a school football match whilst in the wall for a direct free kick. The man, then youth, taking the kick was Graham Taylor, of Watford and England.

I remember the teacher saying, well stopped, lad. I thought, if I'd seen it coming, I would have ducked!

Paul
Philo 10 99 83 England
26 Mar 2013 6:57PM
Thanks, Paul, a great "claim to fame".
Phil

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