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Heart by trails

By JacopoR  
I know in this photo there's not so much technique but I'd like having some feedbacks!

Tags: Sky Summer Heart Blue General Clean Plane Trails Show Air Italy

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Mike43 5 17 21 England
17 Apr 2013 1:07PM
Nicely seen and photographed.
Mike.

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cats_123 Plus
12 4.6k 27 Northern Ireland
17 Apr 2013 1:43PM
think a rotation would make this perfect Smile
KarenFB Plus
10 4.7k 169 England
17 Apr 2013 2:46PM
Hi Jacopo, welcome to EPZ! Smile

A fascinating image, beautifully caught.
Sooty_1 6 1.5k 220 United Kingdom
17 Apr 2013 3:14PM
Nice idea, and the exposure is pretty good. There isn't much there to critique really, though I would have liked to have seen more of the trails, as it's only an impression of a heart rather than a complete one. It looks a bit like you've added a blue grad effect at the bottom to hide something (heads, perhaps?) which has hidden the bottom of the heart as well.
It also looks like it's a few minutes old and is starting to dissipate - a fresh one would hold the shape better.

Nick
JacopoR 3 1 Italy
17 Apr 2013 4:12PM

Quote:Nice idea, and the exposure is pretty good. There isn't much there to critique really, though I would have liked to have seen more of the trails, as it's only an impression of a heart rather than a complete one. It looks a bit like you've added a blue grad effect at the bottom to hide something (heads, perhaps?) which has hidden the bottom of the heart as well.
It also looks like it's a few minutes old and is starting to dissipate - a fresh one would hold the shape better.

Nick



Yes, I've hidden some heads and buildings at the bottom but the shape just finished there...thanks for your comment Smile

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