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I am mad

By cosmin_gradinariu
I interpret the photograph this way: the subject is considered insane because she is playing an invisible piano. I also wanted to create a creepy atmosphere by adjusting the colors, exposure etc. All in all, I would like to know if I got anywhere near creating the story.

Tags: Portraits and people Girl dress mask piano

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Dizize 9 United States
24 Jun 2010 12:12AM
Oh yes indeed!! Very nice!
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Toonman 13 1.4k 2 England
24 Jun 2010 6:52AM
Ni Cosmin.

The idea is great but I would crop in closer, there is a litle to much space above the head, that way you would see the face and hands more clearly...and more spooky.

Adam
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9 653 39 India
24 Jun 2010 9:56AM
Nice idea and good capture...but i feel a bit closer to the subject might convey the idea better like toonman says above...have done a crop to bring the subject more into prominence..hope this helps Smile
ade_mcfade 16 15.2k 216 England
24 Jun 2010 1:20PM
striking outfit and pose you've captured here

main thing I'd say is that she's pretty small in the frame - the background above her head is pretty huge and dosn't have a lot of interest to add to the shot. It's a decent backdrop, I like the stone, but does it deserve so much prominance - or would it be better with it cropped to make her bigger in the frame ?

As for the story...

well to be honest, it's hard to see what she's doing with her being so small, the crop will help that.

Does she look like she's playing the piano... well in a way, she looks like she's creeping up on someone - like in an old horror movie, think Nosforatu. For piano, maybe get her seated - I play sat down - and perhaps the hands wider apart, also maybe think about how you could imply a pedal as most pianists use the pedals an awful lot.

Really like the shot and outfit Smile
Eviscera 13 1.1k 149 United Kingdom
24 Jun 2010 10:59PM
Good creativity.

Agree about the distractions of the wall space , but perhaps that was your licence in creating a more vulnerable element.

Anyway , whacked up a quick mod with an inferred keyboard to ground your idea. Didnt bother to much with the opacity ,scaling or perspective , but it might give you an idea where to take the next image.

I think the crit team are all In South Africa !

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