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In the name of the father

By Allex2501      
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Tags: Portraits and people

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9 Feb 2012 4:18PM
I love the concept of this picture

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Ade_Osman 13 4.5k 36 England
9 Feb 2012 4:25PM
Concept is very good, would have preferred to see the gun more in focus, using a smaller aperture, just an opinion of course.....Others may like it as it is....

Ade
Philo Plus
6 99 83 England
9 Feb 2012 10:20PM
I think this is excellent overall. I hate cigs but it works really well here and the wisp of smoke is a great touch. My only niggle is the hood coming down over her left eye in a straight vertical line; it just doesn't seem quite right to me.
Phil
Montana5 6 57 3 Scotland
10 Feb 2012 1:56AM
Quite like the positioning of the habit, really like the way the smoke is billowing to the shape of the face.
paulbroad 9 116 1057 United Kingdom
10 Feb 2012 8:11AM
This is excellent. The quality is superb. I would leave focus as is although there is another image entirely with just the gun barrel sharp. I wonder about all the black - I think I would crop most of it.

Paul
JackAllTog Plus
7 4.4k 58 United Kingdom
10 Feb 2012 1:54PM
Excellent shot, love the sharpness of the models eyes and the way the hood is just lit around the outline to make it show.
In terms of critique - maybe only that it all happens in the top LHS, its almost too cluttered all in one space, it could be spread out a tiny bit more. the lower section seems empty and the detail/lace on her top stands out but does not add either a sexy or hard look as it is at the moment.
Also her lipstick seeps to stop with a very hard line - looks odd to me.
- I'm perhaps being over picky here but only to try and critique i think could change for the better.
Kind regards
Stuart
kaybee 12 4.9k 25 Scotland
10 Feb 2012 7:08PM
I like this a lot - the devil tail nosering is a lovely finishing touch.

It is the front of the gun that bothers me on 3 counts ........ a) The aim is off slightly so she would miss b) the front plate is off kilter which makes it look like a replica and takes away impact c) the focus on the barrel for me is either not sharp enough or not blurred enough.

But these are just my thoughts and have no real relevance since it is your image and what your feelings are are paramount.

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