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In the name of the father

By Allex2501      
Last one of the series

Tags: Black and white Blac and white

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DRicherby 7 269 725 United Kingdom
28 Feb 2012 12:02PM
A strong portrait, with sharp focus on the eyes and dramatic lighting that works really well. I'd suggest sharpening more selectively so you don't emphasize every pore on her skin and I'd clone out the few white spots that are, I guess, reflections from her ear-rings.

Dave.

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banehawi Plus
11 1.3k 3397 Canada
28 Feb 2012 6:06PM
Ive enjoyed the whole series Allex, and I think this is one of the better ones.

It works as it is, but I had a few idea when I downloaed it.

Theres some detail in her eyes that can be recovered; Its a little too dark such that her head dress is blending into the background, - so lighten a little; crop from the bottom to lower her eyes, and also from the sides to maintain the aspect ratio;remove the bright spot from the end of her nose; I agree with David re skinn detail so I applied a very small amount of skin softening; while cropping, I tilted her head a little more to the right.



Hope this is helpful,



regards


Willie

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