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Indian Dancer

By Gordonsimpson
Indian lady dancing in the street. Any feedback would be grateful, I'm just starting out with photography. Thanks

Tags: General Portraits and people

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Glyn1 Plus
8 4 1 England
12 Nov 2009 9:06PM
A lovely candid shot, I think you have done well, good use of depth of field. I might have been tempted to reduce shutter speed and blur one or two of the people, but that pre-supposes you had a tripod with you.


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colmar Plus
10 42 35 Scotland
12 Nov 2009 9:28PM
A grand candid, as above slower shutter and failing that maybe a crop of this image taking out the superflous folks on the right as you look .... I may also have been tempted to move round and capture the dancer with the sun shining towards her and obviously away from you. Nonetheless a good candid street shot thanks for sharing Colin
9 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
12 Nov 2009 10:51PM
its a great subject and you have made a good stab at it but in this kind of street work its vital to think on your feet, work hard at getting a viewpoint that cuts out the maximum amount of distractions.

one method i use that dosnt annoy too many people is to get down on your knees and below those standing up, this also gets you nearer to the subject. also if you are lower you may be able to isolate against buidings or better still the sky.

as it stands the crop above makes the best of what you had i think.
in your mind look for the least complicated background everytime.
Thanks very much for your comments, I'll take on board what you have advised and learn from it.

Phil, thanks for the modification, you're right it does look better.

Thanks again.
pamelajean Plus
11 1.0k 1986 United Kingdom
13 Nov 2009 8:28PM
Hello, Gordon. You have some good advice above. I have done a modification where I blurred the background, showing the effect of a shallower depth of field. I cropped the image, brightened it, lifted the shadows because the dancer was in shade, reduced the highlights and increased the saturation. I then selected the background, applied gaussian blur at a low level, and added some contrast overall for a bit more colour.

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