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By imander
Still trying new things, this is the second and third from my session with my eldest daughter.Thanks for the comments and critique on the first one, your thoughts on these will be much appreciated.

Cheers Ian

v3 is an addition as suggested by Diana

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Diana 11 2.0k 19 Netherlands
10 Aug 2009 10:49AM
V2 is my fave Ian for sure

but if you are OK for a bit of critique, (and you say you are) the view out of the window might be a little more appealling, if she is isolated...then a woods or trees or something other than the roof of another house (and not a very interesting roof at that) even a church ...but something that gives more of a feeling of isolation and loneliness ..that my thoughts anyway, for what they are worth

great series coming up though... enjoying viewing these


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imander 11 388 7 United Kingdom
10 Aug 2009 11:42AM
Hi Diana
thankyou for your comment and while I can see where you are comming from, i had a different view point, I was taking it from the lonely child who is watching other children out at play, she's left alone and ignored, may be a better view from the window would of made this clearer.
Thanks again for taking the time to critique
Diana 11 2.0k 19 Netherlands
10 Aug 2009 11:46AM
OIC then a school or park maybe ..empty roundabout ..or rocking horse, seesaw...........still good though as is Smile

Diana 11 2.0k 19 Netherlands
10 Aug 2009 12:22PM

thanks for the PM yep perfectos

V3... quick bit of work! that speaks the message loud and clear

great work Ian

TyChee 13 275 1 United States
10 Aug 2009 2:30PM
Great lighting in these shots. Torn between V1 and V2. Excellent work.
mikbee 11 3 8 Scotland
10 Aug 2009 3:29PM
Like V3 Ian.A different viewpoint with what you see.A child just waiting on someone out there to go out and play with.She is too shy/frightened to go out herself. Good work. ( but do not make a habit of posting images where I have to ''think'' !!)
SlowSong Plus
9 7.4k 30 England
10 Aug 2009 3:58PM
I like V1. It's like there's nothing else out there except boring roofs. Might as well stay indoors.
10 Aug 2009 5:58PM
I think, 'Let Me Out To Play' would've been my title for this trio Ian. Good work once again from you both.

John Smile
Paul_cats Plus
12 61 22 Scotland
10 Aug 2009 8:40PM
An excellent addition to the isolated series. V2 is excellent if it is intended to be along the same theme as my comment of yesterday which I am glad did not offend. Phew!
ChiliMan 11 135 17 Singapore
13 Aug 2009 9:23AM
Brilliant. Conceptually and lightfully. Your daughter makes a good model, Ian. Tell her that.

Also, Diana's suggestion is superb and V3's a good addition! Nice one, Ian and Diana Smile


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