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Jade 2

By Anthony      
another upload from my time with Jade.

The wind was playing havoc with her hair, certainly not with mine, but we got a lot of natural looking shots.

I liked this one, it was simple, yet i feel effective.

Thanks for looking

Anthony

f6.3, 1/640th sec, at 100 iso.

Tags: Model Canon Glasses Liverpool 30d Jade Albert dock Portraits and people

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sherlob Plus
13 3.1k 129 United Kingdom
27 May 2012 11:58AM
I like the pose in this one Anthony, and the composition is really working for you here. I'm not wholly convinced by the flash (I assume you used fill in flash?) - perhaps a reflector may have been a better option (whilst the light it has given is ok it has made the skin of her face appear a little waxy - I suspect a more diffused light source for the fill wouldn't have done this, but I could well be wrong. However, here the wind is the main problem - that strand of hair that has blown across your models eyes is really quite distracting... still - once again - more positives than negatives! I think in portrait work (the little that have done) that the devil is in the detail.

Regards,

Adam

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Anthony 18 5.6k 17 United Kingdom
27 May 2012 12:03PM
cheers Adam. I was going to clone out the hair, but in fact I liked it. Thats why I left it.

It was so hot down in that wee space we were in, i reckon its just some sweat sheen on the surface of her skin. I suppose I should have noticed it. Yes, i used some fill flash too, funnilly enough with a stofen diffuser on it.

Still appreciate the time to give feedback, so thank you.

Anthony
Richsr 12 91 223 England
27 May 2012 1:05PM
Like the use of the location Anthony, can see why see is lying down with those shoes Smile
regards Richard

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