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James & Ashliegh

By Gary_R
Hi all this one of my first potraits using my studio flash,still need alot of direction so any suggestions greatly appreciated.
Studio flash used was 2 Elinchrom Dlite-4's one 45 degrees on left, one high behind on right i think,it was a while ago now.
Havent had much time to use them but really want to get back into it just need some more victims Smile.

thanks
Gary

Tags: Black and white Portraits and people

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paulbroad 8 114 1034 United Kingdom
7 May 2011 9:04PM
The quality is excellent - but why mono/ I would much prefer this in colour - i was brought up in a mono darkroom, but now reserve it for the high contrast hard gritty stuff. in this case, go slightly sepia to add warmth. I would also crop in much tighter on the faces - off the top to the top of her head, down behind his ear and a bit off the bottom.

Paul

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Gary_R 5 1 United Kingdom
7 May 2011 11:20PM
Hi Paul thats just sort of insight i need and i will be trying those ideas first chance i get.
Thanks for taking the time to comment.

Gary

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