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Jen - Modified

By bailey73  
This is a rework of a previous shot taken last weekend

Comments and critique welcome

Tags: Portraits and people Nude and glamour

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Comments


Brilliant mono shot! Amazing model!
Yours faithfully, Oleg.

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3 Nov 2012 7:29PM
Nice work!
DeSilver Plus
8 13 11 England
4 Nov 2012 9:15AM
A lovely mono image. Well lit and superbly captured. Smile


David.
banehawi Plus
11 1.3k 3354 Canada
4 Nov 2012 3:16PM
Nice range of tones in the mono conversion. Its a pity that the end of her foot is missing. I would suggest a little more light on her face, and to address the fact her knees are too close to the top of the frame, just extend the canvas a little.

Loaded a mod to show what I mean,



regards



Willie
mex Plus
8 23 3 United Kingdom
4 Nov 2012 3:48PM
Hi Darren, just put a surface blur on to blend the skin tones on the head and re sharpened the lips and eyes and a crop, hope its ok.
cheers phil.
Focus_Man 5 481 631 United Kingdom
5 Nov 2012 9:28AM
Nice shot

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