Views: 71 (50 Unique) 
Vote 7
Award Shortlist   

Joanne 4

By bulldozer  
Another shot from the session at the weekend. Taken in a makeshift studio in a front room no bigger than 3mx3.5m!

This was the first time that my friend Joanne had done anything like formal modelling and it was quite a learning curve for both of us!

Hope you like it. Comments and feedback welcome as ever.

John

Tags: Woman Flash Studio Nikon d300 Fashion Elinchrom Black dress Dlite Portraits and people Flash and lighting

Voters: 110_TURNER, terry_cavner, graceland and 4 more


Take your photography to the next level and beyond...

  • NEWS
  • REVIEWS
  • INSPIRATION
  • COMMUNITY
  • COMPETITIONS

Why not join for free today?

Join for Free

Your total photography experience starts here


Christmas Prize Draw 2017

Comments


stix 13 924 87 United Kingdom
30 Sep 2008 7:44PM
HI John
This is much better than the last one. I like the more relaxed pose, and the more relaxed expression. I think she would be happier with this shot.
Couple of problems, glare from the background, spoils the exposure.
Try taking a shot using only the background lights,ideally your model should be in silhouette. Then you know you have no glare.
Eye contact, Just missed it I'm afraid. If you want a shot without eye contact, then it must look intentional. strong eye contact would have lifted this picture.
I think you would get a more relaxed look if you tried seating your model, especially if she is inexperienced.
HTH
Martin

Join ePHOTOzine for free and remove these adverts.

Sign In

You must be a member to leave a comment.

ePHOTOzine, the web's friendliest photography community.

Join For Free

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more.