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Just In Case (II)

By jellylegs  
Sorry for doing this, but I got such good feedback yesterday on how to improve this that I said I'd give it a go.

Modified yesterdays upload to lighten the left hand side of the life buoy as suggested. I also lightened the image slightly overall, used curves to increase contrast & remove slight colour cast, dodged & burned, & went around and cloned out all the papers in the grasses.

I got rid of the dodgy border & replaced with this other dodgy border!

Interested in feedback again. Thanks.

Trevor.

Tags: Landscape and travel

Voters: PatrickSmith, Ceciliat, CollY and 18 more


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Comments


chrisfroud 15 521
29 Mar 2006 2:36AM
Yes, that's better Smile
Chris
Chant57 Plus
14 395 3 United Kingdom
29 Mar 2006 2:42AM
Much better framing, and a "tidier" image.
C
John_Duckett 16 386 2 Norfolk Island
29 Mar 2006 3:16AM
Yep much better with this border

John
deegee 15 181 United Kingdom
29 Mar 2006 5:46AM
Liked yesterdays, like todays Smile
jimbocarroll 15 30 Ireland
29 Mar 2006 7:11AM
Excellent work, better than last post so the effort was worth it!
Sabreur 15 767 England
29 Mar 2006 7:16AM
This border is definitely better - adding to an already excellant picture. The colouring is an improvement over yesterday's version.
martinproe 15 293 5 England
29 Mar 2006 8:38AM
I'd have been delighted with either of these, but I do prefer this one.
jellylegs 16 59 Ireland
29 Mar 2006 9:40PM
Thanks for the feedback guys.

Trevor.
CollY 14 14
31 Mar 2006 2:30PM
Great moody in this image, love the lighting and the strength of colour...fabulous sky to match the detail in the FG.
Well done
COlleen
PatrickSmith 15 1.2k 2 United States
3 Apr 2006 5:23PM
Yes, this one overall looks better to me. Good reworking.
Patrick

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