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KIlchurn Castle - var 1

By Bellai
based on yesterday's comments I've amended Kilchurn Castle again - what do you think? Many thanks for your comments and advise. Isabella

Tags: Landscape Architecture Castles Landscape and travel

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RonnieAG Plus
6 153 116 Scotland
15 Mar 2011 12:34AM
I prefer V 1 where you have retained the f/g but just cropped a bit off the right to take the Castle off centre stage: I am less keen on V 2 and 3 where you have lost the mountain top. But V 1 is an improvement compositionally.
Ronnie.

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nonur Plus
7 15 9 Turkey
15 Mar 2011 1:48AM
Each a cracker! Great light and compo! Congrats and regards, Nezih.
15 Mar 2011 4:03AM
beautiful shot.
SUE118 Plus
7 8 1 United Kingdom
15 Mar 2011 7:28AM
4 superb shots.
CathR 9 151 564 United Kingdom
15 Mar 2011 4:35PM
You have created quite a different feel with V4 Isabella. The castle is perhaps a little overexposed but it sits nicely in the landscape with the mountains/clouds arranged well behind. There are some aspects which do not fit into the "rules" like the castle is fairly central and the tree is quite near the edge of the frame but it hangs together well somehow. I like the shadows of the trees in the foreground.

In V1 - 3 you have nice light on the castle making it a lovely golden colour. I like V3 with just the small clump of trees and the castle but excluding the top of the mountain is a pity. Sometimes it is difficult to get that perfect combination!

Best wishes

Catherine
Bellai 8 Scotland
15 Mar 2011 10:42PM
Hi All,
Thanks very much for your comments, I've got even more to think about now - Regards Isabella
kinfatric 11 550 9 Scotland
16 Dec 2011 6:54PM
I particularly like version 4 for the light and shadows in the scene.
Like the capture of light on the mountain top and lovely composition in V1 very well done on the set

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