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I like the shot in terms of catching the moment, however I think that the shot itself has a harsh mixture of light and dark areas that slightly distract from the composition. I think less shadows and more light would make this BW shot stand out more. Post work you might want to consider running a noise reduction against the facial areas, reduce shadows and maybe apply a soft filter to the shot.
Greg
Greg
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